Awesome awesome awesome! Another really good poem, It was good you were able to keep the same rhyme throughout the poem without making it sound forced. Great job! 5/5

`taleee xx

Great Dark poem. I loved the Very last stanze. It had such emotion and I really enjoyed reading it.

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I love it!! sounds like me ;)
Psycho w/a razorblade

I thought alot of it was forced rhyming... but, after the poem was over, I thought it all worked with the construction of it. I liked the descriptions you flashed to the reader. Good Job~

This is a very good poem, I really like it, but as I'm reading it ... it almost seemed like you tried a little too hard to rhyme, maybe try only rhyming two lines at a time instead of four, but other than that it's really good, and I love the 2 ending lines =)