Great job..Perfect Flow
Perfect Rhyme
Perfect Expression
Great job through the whole thing
Excellent
5/5
~TBOY~

Wonderful poem 5/5, just wish you'd finished that last stanza, seemed cut off at the end, but nevertheless, good job.

Nice rhyming pattern, good work keep it up

If this helps any... this poem seems unfinished... i think theres more to the story.. know what i mean?

~David