by Shae Mar 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
My days are long and painful, |
by Kandi
I really love that poem.. that's exactly how i feel since my 1st love died... good job |
by LESTREX
NO YOUR MORE THAN WELCOME THAT CAN BE A PROBLEM SOMETIMES WHEN YOU WRITE ABOUT SOMETHING PERSONAL TO YOURSELF I WENT BACK TO MINE AND CHANGED A FEW WORDS WHEN I HAD CALMED DOWN |
by LESTREX
Nice poem dont want to pick faults but last verse could be nicer |