Nice poem dont want to pick faults but last verse could be nicer
So with nothing left but memories,
and a headstone to mark where you lay deep.
Goodbye my best friend forever,
Have peace in your endless sleep

NO YOUR MORE THAN WELCOME THAT CAN BE A PROBLEM SOMETIMES WHEN YOU WRITE ABOUT SOMETHING PERSONAL TO YOURSELF I WENT BACK TO MINE AND CHANGED A FEW WORDS WHEN I HAD CALMED DOWN

I really love that poem.. that's exactly how i feel since my 1st love died... good job