Aww thts sad that your goin away
you can write some truly amazing work
and if u want to see my work that is better then this go to poem search
and type in.. Torn Pieces Of my Heart..you should see many poems by an author with 3 golds and 1 silver..well thts my real account
and i got some amazing work in there..check em out
And your thing was Truly heartfelt
Amazing
and i love your rhyme and flow
Great job again
5/5
~TBOY~