You are so lucky that I love you, I had to sign in twice in order to comment.

I like the poem, but I think that once you write a poem dedicated to one person, you cannot revise it and say you wrote it for someone else, just because you lost respect for the person you initially wrote it for.

I believe that a poem loses all its meaning when you do that, or just the simple fact that it have none anymore.

To those that just read this poem for the first time, they were left with an impression that you are a great friend(which you are) only they didn't know that the person you first wrote this poem for are no longer your friend.

I'm sorry I am going on and on about it, but I think in order for this poem to work, you have to have a special meaning for it. I have explain why already.

The poem itself was splendid, I just suggest you change the title, because the title makes one think that you are writing about yourself and not about another friend.

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