As Loud As It Can Go

by ღтεεиαgε тяαgεdуღ   Mar 11, 2006


She runs into her room
Crying once again
Looks down at her stereo
Her only loyal friend

It feels like the room is shaking.
As she cranks the volume up
Even when its as loud as can be
It does not feel like its enough

She closes all the windows.
And slams her bedroom door.
A heart can only take so much pain.
And hers can't take much more.

Hot tears are running now.
Tracing lines down her skin.
And once again
She can feel her heart breaking within

Screaming out the songs words
Her shoulders shake with all her might
"What happened?" you're wondering
Oh, just another family fight.

Her family life's a mess.
And no one seems to understand
Misjudged and alone most
When she needs a helping hand

Her friends have deserted her.
Left her on her own.
And with no one to help her,
The loneliness seems to grow

Her friends, they break her down
To the point where she's in tears.
Crying silently to the sound of her music
Swallowed by all her fears.

She does not want them to know she cries.
She fakes her smile in fear
She does not want them to know
They've left her bleeding hear.

She looks to the stereo
The speakers are about to blow
As she turns the music up
As loud as it can go

it's not very good. sorry its so poor. but comments and votes are always loved and returned.

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  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Oh my gosh! i know exactly the feeling of this poem! i'm on anti-depressants and i still cried because i soooo know how it feels! it's like all the pains and sorrows and everything that goes wrong is always louder than the music and you want to drown all those thoughts out...oh man, i gotta read it again! **5/5** sweetie, and you're definitely on my favorites list!

    Love
    Lolli

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady in Red

    WOW! I'm litteraly shaking right about now. That really got to me. I fight with my family all the time...and my friends have kinda left me...so i'm alone...but that poem is exactly what i feel like...when the stereo is my only "Loyal Friend" Good job 5/5

  • Wow!!! thanks guys!!!
    yeah...i'm pretty ok now...everything just kinda spiraled out of control. but its on track now...thanks so much!!

  • Wow!!! thanks guys!!!
    yeah...i'm pretty ok now...everything just kinda spiraled out of control. but its on track now...thanks so much!!

  • Omg! i loved it! and i hope that your okay! but i think we can all realate to this at times....
    and if you ever need to talk! jsut give me an email or something like that! i loved your poem! it really ment something!! great job!

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