by Lonely Heart .ღ. Mar 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Every moment with you I saved in my heart |
by Timothy B
Know what ya going through there. my gf left me 2 months ago, and I also felt like it was the end of the world. but after some time, I got over it. just hang on, and allow your mind to relax, and think clearly again. Life keeps on going no mather what, so don't go giving up so easy. |
by Biscuit
I always admire those who can rhyme without ruining the poem! well done! |
by Synh
Good poem |
by Angie
Wow, thats an amazing poem. Your flow was well done as well as the consistant use of vocabulary. I luved it. I really liked the lines: |
This poem was excptionally strong, and FILLED with great emotions! I really loved your wording, and how strong the feelings were. great poem!! 5/5 |