by Fallen~Tears Mar 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I love you, i found that out the first time you held my hand tight |
by Natalie
Sad, But good. I didn't quite understand this line though; 'But as soon as he told you to let me go, you did you became a big sis' It got me abit confused. It was a good poem, Just a little shaky. |
by PS
I like it. nice job. im sure what exactly happened but nice. i think knew should be new. |