Comments : I Smile

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Fleckney

    Wow I loved this great imagry. You have great skills, keep it up.
    Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by aga

    Ohh my this is very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow.. This is amazing!

    There is a unique flow in this poem. I love the different parts, all with a different flow. Which makes it exciting to read.

    Cause sometimes when a poem is very long with the same rhytme and rhyme it gets a bit boring to read, cause you can tell what's next.

    I love the "It's the rain.. It's the moon" part.. amazing haha.

    Creative poem! One of a kind.. Master piece. Love your work, I really do.

    Should have found you sooner damnit! Haha.. But oh well.. Now I have some new stuff to read, which I love, so I'll add you to my favorites and I'll try to catch up =)

    Lotsaaaaaa love -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by aga

    Wow i LOVED this poem, your an expert at these wow,
    i love them,
    all your words have life in them
    Keep it up