Comments : Suicide Note

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Another good one great job

  • 18 years ago

    by FranFran

    OMg Nat can I call you nat? but that was so ............ emotional because sometimes i feel tha exact same way!!! but hey if you have msn add me luckie_charm05@hotmail.com
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    _____________Frannie_________________

  • 18 years ago

    by Lilly

    I disagree with Silver up there ^^. this may be an over used poem subject but each and every poet (including you) bring something new and unique the words chosen. this poem is beautiful in my eyes!

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Wow greta poem
    your amazing!
    thanks fir your comment =]
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow omg wow i love it. its so amazing. i read one of ur other poems. i love htat one too. ur an amazing writer. i can kinda relate to this.. ur so talented. wow i lvoe this poem. jeeze its amazing. i jus lvoe it. keep writing
    take care
    luve angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Sar

    Wow, this poem actually bought tears to my eyes so it must be something, its really good poem and i really love it.
    i like the way the verses were kept short but powerful 5/5
    a really excellent piece of work

    sarah xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Black*Rose~

    Wow, I really like this poem it is fabulouse, it gave me goose pimples, I know how you feel, and that allot can relate, I gave this one a 5/5 I really love this poem, it has a Wonderfull flow to it, it is fabulose, I really love this one, you are a great writter keep of the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    WOW taleee.. this was amaaziing.. it's true right? aw.. we love you hun! dont ever forget that k? this was excellent as usual.. but this had something special.. it was if i was truly seeing inside of you.. i could see and feel everything you were feeling.. that is how great your writing is.. this was so filled with emotions that they started falling out! lol :P i adored this poem.. it was ... fantastic! i love the last stanza.. it was an excellent way to end the poem, bringing it all to an end in the perfect way.. dont get me wrong, i loved all the other stanza's too! hehe.. truly wonderful poem! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    Wow, just thought id read one of your featured ones to even our count. N I got your 2000th rate! lol. But absoloutly great poem. So damn powerful

    The pain and suffering
    That i felt it inside
    Was to much to handle
    That is why i chose suicide.

    the last line I think could be just a sylable or 2 shorter, and it would fit PERFECTLY!! other than that. great poem 5/5

    ~*`Bryce Dressler`*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Kay

    Hey i like your poem..hopefully it wasent meant to be used..thanks for the comment..your a good writter..keep up the good work..
    xoxo
    Kay
    p.s-the e-mails kinda pissed me off..but dont worry about it..doesnt matter anymore..

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. I hope you really don't feel like this. =( I know things can be down and 'unde rthe weather' sometimes but it'll be ok. No worries. =) I loved the poem though. Great flowing, and emotion. 5/5 =) xoxo

    Samantha