Very well written this poem fills me with longing, and reminds me of dreams I used to have. Good job.
Tim

Had me worried for a while =S, nice poem, keep it up *im cleaning at the same time so sorry its such a slaker comment*

Love you always
Jenn

Hmm.. I love this poem! It sounds so real, as if we are sitting on a couch and your telling me all this. In a poetic way offcourse.

Lovely, Well.. I'm actually glad you left it a bit behind and these feeling are from a while ago.

Well done, =) Loved every part of it!

Lotsaa love -xxx-

Ps; Your right in your comment about the "lengthy" part, I'll try to change it. Thanks for you critic, I appreciate it.