by SERAbaby Mar 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Behind her pretty face |
by Kaitlyn
Wow i love this. it flowed really well together the rhymes and everything. I think you could explore more deepth but brilliant. |
by Kaylee
It flowed well and seemed pretty good with the rhymes and stuff. Hard to pull off. Again you could have gone deeper. I think this now puts us in the place of the person or people ignoring the girl. Shame people ignore when others are in pain. |
by Fallen~Tears
WOW... this is definitly my favorite of the two great job.. i love the whole thing.. its SOOOOO true.. |
by PS
I esp love the second stanza. overall pretty good. |
by ASPHYXIATED
Hey there. |