Mike,

It may have taken a while, but I'm glad you don't get this agnry a whole lot =) poetry wise the ryhme scheme... get this... I liked it! lol, your imagery throughout the poem was brill. Again one of your bests =) keep it up I love you,

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Tinkerbell

Wow.. I'm impressed. It's excellent. That's all I can say. Well done! Lotsaa love -xxx-

Thanks for commenting my poem. This poem is really great, i can feel every single word you explain and say..its as though i see a clear image.
Keep this awsome awsome job up!

Another Great Set Of Rhymes.. And A Great Way To Top Your Other Poem.. It's Nicely Done.. Congrats.

That's brilliant Mike. This poem and the previous definitely correspond, and I hope the next two will fit in well. I'm excited to read!!!

Awesome poem friend, keep them coming :) I look forward to reading your other poems.

Peace. [Sole]