Wow that's kinda harsh...yet powerful, i love it...it's just beautifuly written, good job hunn luv ya-xxx-

This poem has an interesting topic.

I can't really say what I like about it, it's all so amazing, and as I was reading this, "Once again the enemy came back
To strike and take what's mine
It was just another panic attack
I'll be fine" The "I'll be fine" hit me real hard. So many times I have heard that and it's not true, I have always tried to depict this in some of my poems but, I can never do it, I'm glad someone can do it, this poem ended differently than the other's though, but it still ended strong. Your work is wonderful, and I am looking forward to reading more.

"I'll be fine"

Awesome job..
I love it, this is a masterpiece, I'm going to delete you from my favorites just to put you back on.

Great poem. i really like your way of writing. and i admire your writing, it is really good. i was surpised to see that you're from netherlands. i would never have been able to tell. i love how your poems are powerful and really mean something. good job. 5/5

Wow, this is so powerful and sad!
"I seek perfection
I seek recognition
But I find it hard to choose a direction
Since Fear is my only intuition"
^^^ I LOVE this stanza, perfectly written. You convey your emotions very beautifully! Excellent write!

Wow, i havnt seen a poem like this before but i like it, its thoughtful but a bot hard to understand but i think its because im like 14 and quite stupid. anyway i hope u follow the right path for u, following ur heart, hope u find happinessno matter wt. take care and good luck.

This poem is awsome. So many people are prisioners of fear and you explained that good. I like how you write.

Good poem. I loved it keep it up=)

Sometimes i wish i was six feet below the ground... quite disturbing but life is really burdensome... although life is fun it can sometimes be hard... i just keep on going because the problems i face along the way makes life worth it... if i can't find peace in this world i just close my eyes and pray to God...

I LOVE IT!!! its so good! please keep up the good work and if you want cheak out my poems and quotes!
keep it up!
Ris

Great poem def 5/5 keep writing and take care hun sarah x

This is a really really good poem keep up the good work:)love lucy XxXxXx

A very powerful poem written in quite a simple way. I liked it a lot.

What really struck me was the "I'm fine". It sort of hits the reader hard and makes them question whether that's true or not. Good job on that.

What I especially liked in your poem were the last two lines "I'll finally be Forgiven and Forgotten/And no longer Fear's slave". What a brilliant way to end!

I just wanted to request that you read one of my poems. I've just submitted a bundle and, having only joined the site less than ten minutes ago, I don't have any comments. I'd really appreciate your comment as a fellow poet. Thanks in advance!

Wow ur poem is so freaking awsome. i would appreciate any suggetions cuz im sorta new at this. thanks!

Bowled over by the line ' fear is my only intuition"

Hey i like this poem cuz i really belive that u put ur heart into it. and i have queston, where it says your poems well how do i add my poems that i write?

Brilliant peice, very powerfully written, some of the lines and phrases are really strong and soryt of hit the reader and yuo fo though. the flow is good and the contant brilliant. overll a great epice

5/5

I like this poem! I cant believe you are from the netherlands I mean i cant tell but yeah!! You are a great writer no doubt about it! you are talented girl!! 5/5

Heya that was strong!!!!
I like the way you wrote it and hw how chose the words so rightly!!!
keep the good work up and good luck
Lov
NemO x0x0x0x0

The has a good flow and rhythm to it and I think these would make good lyrics. your feelings come across really clearly. Nice work :)

Woah....
Really, really powerful... Just a little out there.. Yeah, not anything else I can comment on, except that it was really clear and powerful... blah, really gud...