Brilliant! I love how you broke off from the usual rhyme like every other poem uses... this was a very well written poem

PS. ppl please R/R/C my poems too and I'll returnt he favour!

WOW! I can totally realate. Guys don't look at anyong close enough....they just act like everythings perfect......I love this, keep up the good work:)

Please comment on my poems:)