I don't know why.. but this poem is so powerful, somehow I had the feeling you were talking to me, standing right in front of me and shouting this all to me. '

I felt so much reading this poem. The phrase that really got me was " I can see your fear, it shows in everything you do"...... That really got me.. Pretty scary how much you got me there actually.. hah

Wow.. god.. I could spend a whole day reading your poems! And when I'm done I could start all over again and love it haha

Also thank you for all your compliments =) That is so sweet ghehe It's an honor to have your comments writtin under my poems *bows to the master* =)

Love ya
-xxx-

OK, let me just say, the ending was good. But I still like the 3rd poem to this series!!! Excellent stuff, all of them fit in so perfectly. I like poetry that does that. I have a series called Faces of the Moon. It has a lot of emotion in it, and you feel differently for each poem. Six in total, but shared under 3 different genres. Maybe if you get a chance to read it you can tell me what you think. Again, excellent job with these poems.

A great write. Thats a really powerful poem you've written :)

Peace. [Sole]

I liked it!!It is different from what I am use to!!That makes me like it that much more!!It is really great!!!

Hey there first off once again you've written an excellent porm=) and second thanx for the comments the helped alot and i truly appreciate you being honest about it=)
Ashley

Dang i cant type tonight! Sorry, excelent poem and the comment helped alot*

Excelent poem 5/5

This is awwesome. i love ur poetry...it stands out somehow...i dont know how...but it does...it's almost soothing...but raging at the same time...i dunno...it sounds corny...

Excellent.....so powerful and touching.......
great write

luv,
Bharti

I love it you should really keep it up

Hi dear!
i wanna join ur club. can i? u can go thru may poems........

Hi dear!
i wanna join ur club. can i? u can go thru my poems........

Omg this poem is so powerful
i cn almost hear you saying it
i loved it
teach me how to write this way!!lol
i love yourpoem