Spread my wings. (Fly)

by -x-Ruthie-x-   Mar 11, 2006


Now that you've come into my life,
I feel I am finally free.
Free to fly and spread these wings,
Free to finally be me.

Like a dove to air,
You have made me complete.
A sweet gift given to me,
Nothing can ever compete.

You are the light at the end of my tunnel,
You are the brightest star in the sky.
To me you mean the whole world and more,
Now thanks to you I can finally fly.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This a beautiful poem, I loved the message and theme, since we all want to fly, I think that's why I can relate to it.

    Great job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The best part of this poem were the first and last stanza because they just felt like they belonged together. The middle was pretty sweet too. I liked how you used a dove as a symbol and used the words: Free to finally be me. Makes me wonder if this was written for somebody or whether it's just something you wanted to write. The only thing I would suggest is to capitalize your i's. Other then that, looking forward to reading more of your poems.

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