The best part of this poem were the first and last stanza because they just felt like they belonged together. The middle was pretty sweet too. I liked how you used a dove as a symbol and used the words: Free to finally be me. Makes me wonder if this was written for somebody or whether it's just something you wanted to write. The only thing I would suggest is to capitalize your i's. Other then that, looking forward to reading more of your poems.

This a beautiful poem, I loved the message and theme, since we all want to fly, I think that's why I can relate to it.

Great job! 5/5