Ur really good!!! ang its sweet tht u dedicate ur poem to a girl....and thts almost my name 2 lol but ur really good keep on writing

THIS IS A NICE POEM AND ALSO SWEET

Hey, liked the poem, really nice and i can tell it came from the heart =) Hope gabs is alright to

Linds x

I like it try using luscious or antoehr word for sweet so it doesnt get annoying..nto that it dd but yeah..lovely lovely poem..vr yvr ytalented you are indeed.

EXCELLENT>

Lissa