by Juls Mar 11, 2006
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
As she arrives she holds her breath |
AWWWW. .... this made me cry........that was really really good.........i wish i could write that good oneday....you must have been really inspired when you wrote this........i love it.....keep it up (you know so you can entertain me~!~:) ) |
by Mona
Wow. I love the story it tells. I could just feel it and see it all happen right in front of me. Amazing. Very sad though =*(. Well done, loved it a lot! Lotsaa love -xxx- |
by LuvMeAlwayz
Sweet poem ^^ cant wait to read more |
by Sole
Impressive Poetry - I love the imagery used :) Look forward to reading your other poems. |
by †Undone♥
This was so good! |