Hewwo Mike.
this was a dark, yet interesting poem!
I really loved your choice of words through out the poem, and it was a good and scary idea :D I liked your flow and nothing seemed forced which was great unlike alot of poems. This had a flow but still had a poetic image to it, and I knwo that makes no sense o.O
GoodWork.x

Ah! I love this poem! Briljant! Amazing, love the power in this poem, makes me wanna scream "let us all die". Well done! Very powerful, keeps echoing in my mind. Wonderful! -xxx-

I like this one to!!I really liked the "letusalldie" It was really kewl!!