by Biscuit Mar 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
All around me is love; |
Mmmmm I think my favorite stanza is "Bouncing on the water, |
by Megann Lee
Ohh. I like this. It was really nicely done. Great way to put how you feel into a poem. Lovely. :] |
Very well expressed...i really liked the wording and how all the words were just so beautiful when you put them together. I could feel the emotion pouring out of the screen, thats how emotional it was...Great Write!!! |
Cute poem... Your form of writing is really odd to me; you just don't seem to have one. Maybe if you did your flow would be smoother... It's a bit rocky to me. Other than that I loved it.. The way you described everything.. Great job. |
I really like this poem. |