The Start Of A New Day

The sun rises...
The start of a new day.
People and animals awaken...
Brushing sleep away.

Birds start chirping...
Singing their sweet melody.
Animals start playing...
Enjoying the morning tranquility.

Doors slam...
Pushing the peace away.
As people go to work...
The animals continue to play.

~*~please tell me what you think. this is the first time i've attempted a poem like this!~*~