Comments : Only Laughing On The Outside

  • 18 years ago

    by Queen

    I felt it I really felt every word :(

  • 18 years ago

    by Queen

    I felt it I really felt every word :(

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelsi

    Well I guess I don't want to say that I can relate to it and everything else, because just about everyone can! But great job on it, you are a terrific writer, keep up the awesome work! Love Always,
    Kelsi XxXxXx!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Very powerful, I liked it a lot. 5/5

    -Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Randi♥

    Hi, omg i love this poem and its SO SO OH SO true because that what i do everyday im so sorry to say. but read my poems and leave me comments im Deff. adding this one to 1 of my favs.!
    Much Love
    Randi

  • This poem was Amazing keep up the good work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mahynor

    Really, very good and you found a good way to express

  • It is a very beautiful poem, tis amazing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xXroxyXx

    This is one of my favorite poems 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Love you poem.. It's really good.. I can really relate to this poem.. 5/5 definetly. I hope you let me know what you think of my poems.

    x A.

  • 18 years ago

    by beautyinainstant

    That sounds like me everyone thinks my life is so perfect and say i have the perfect life w/ a perfect bf and a perfect family but it really isnt that way at all...then when i do make a mistake people are so easily judging me it sorta sucks but great poem!check out some of mine i think i use the help. ~valerie

  • 18 years ago

    by Kailey

    You're an incredible writer. I love all your stuff, its so good. I love how you express things and how they always just seem to flow. I get so excited when I see a new poem posted. Keep writing.
    Always, Kailey

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME

    5/5
    ~sara~

  • 18 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Of course you know i like this one too

  • 18 years ago

    by Tabi kat

    Wow!!!!!!! these are really good no matter what they are about i enjoy them. But what i don't know is do you have to be in a certain mood or do you just sit down somewhere quiet and just write plz tell me b/c i here lately have not had any inspiration...... PLZ!!!!!! THANKS TaBi

  • 18 years ago

    by DeepSoul

    I have felt this way SO many times! A fake smile is sometimes the only way. But the best cure for a broken heart is a fluffy pillow to cry your heart into. Luv ya~Kim

  • 12 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I have def. sympathized w/ this poem many times...you really hit the nail on the head w/ this description :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lucy

    This is probably my favorite poem on this website, I can relate to this a lot. Very sad but touching, so amazing . .

  • 11 years ago

    by LushPlush

    Wow that's so sad. You are a good poet.