I have you for now...

I just loved this piece. short, but very very beautiful indeed. you got your message across perfectly, and it shows. you choose your words wisely from what i can see, and your also very creative with your writing, i love it. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Nice poem this one is short aswell lol
i like this one alot
xoxroxyxox

I really like the way you brought things of nature into this one... you give the reader the impression that the person you are speaking about is beautiful and special, by doing that. Sad, but at the same time, heart warming to know that there will be moments in life that will remind you of the time you felt this way...Nothing more precious than memories.

Sammib

I wish someone would say something like that to me, but the ending was sad. I been real sad latly too :( but good stuff.

Cool poem u have some really good poems

allana
xoxo

ps thanks for commenting on my poem