by ♥gloria˚s~glen♥ Mar 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
All alone, I rove alone |
by PS
It is beautiful, but i doesnt seem to flow very well. but i like it. some of the images are powerfull and deep. good job. |
by Kaylee
I liked the word choice and yes as someone say a strange *Though unique* poem about depression. And here unique can only mean wonderful and excellent. |
by N J Thornton
Quite a strange poem about depression and death, but of course strange means original so it's all good. I liked your use of diction throughout the poem too. Only criticism is I lost the flow on the first line of the seventh stanza. Keep writing. |
by LuvMeAlwayz
It's good keep it up |