It's good, but short

Lol nice poem made me laugh?

Is the last line meant to be "by" istead of "bye"?
I thought it was a really sweet poem, making it short
made it more effectice =]

Short but sweet.. good job..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

What a fun poem! lol good one, vry cute.

lissa

Awww! This was very sweet. I liked it alot. Birthday poems and stuff always make me all warm and fuzzy inside. It was so good hun. I loved it. Keep up the great work and smile =D Take care and god bless xx 5/5

`Taleee xx