Tired and Weak

by Xavier   Mar 12, 2006


Your hear is tired
your heart is weak
it gets no rest
from all the time
you've been depressed
its been shattered to pieces
millions of times
give your heart a rest
don't tear it apart
The solution is to not love anyone
that is not worth the time
lay back for a while
and dont love at all
remember
your heart it tired
your heart is weak

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  • 18 years ago

    by NATALIE

    I LOVE IT. IT SOUNDS LIKE MY HEART

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Hey! Just a thought...
    You put...
    Your hear is tired
    I think you mean..
    Your heart is tired

    And personally I would change the order of these lines..

    you've been depressed
    its been shattered to pieces
    millions of times

    to-
    its been shattered to pieces
    millions of times
    you've been depressed

    Great work though I cant wait to see more from you.

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