I'm your friend

I like this one. it is not as good as your other works but still a nice read.

5/5

This is a really great poem. we haven't been in touch lately. email me sometime!

Awww baby!! this is really good!!!! love you!!
Amanda

Gosh, you know that I hate doing this, but it sounds like you're writing this poem about me.

And I wish that i could take your pain away, Nick, but I can't even handle my own. I'm so sick of life in general, so sick of crying and hurting over Zac. It feels like it'll never end. True love is forever, right?! Well...what if true love ends...the pain is still forever.

Nick-I'm losing myself all over. I'm not having fun anymore. I'm dying every day because of the intense pain. If I could save you from what I'm feeling now...I'll do whatever I can. And if that means not deceiving you and telling you that you're my life, like Zac told me, then I'll make it crystal clear that I love you, but not like that. I'll do whatever it takes, but I can't keep living like this anymore.

Today is my anniversary with Zac. This day a year ago, we first met. And he barely says a word to me knowing full well that this is our day.

Why is pain so real and intense?! Please. Don't take it away. Just...let me go, I guess. Everything I do from here on out will only hurt you more and more.

OH I like that poem..It's really good! =D