The Storm

by The Flame Within   Mar 12, 2006


When the clouds cry
and hold each other close
as i lay in my bed
is when i miss you the most

when the sky cracks
and lets out its roar
its then my heart hurts
and begins to feel sore

when the earth lets out its breath
and causes the trees to sway
is when i long for you
i wish you never went away

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Wonderful use of writing...i love it!

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by girlii797

    THis is really good!! Nice...keep up the good writings.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cait

    That was amazing! Nice job. I just don't know how you can write so well. Keep doing what you do nick!

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I also strongly favor the middle stanza... It made me shiver, Nick. Amazing work.

    5/5

    Car

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Sad and well done for being short. Quite good actually. An interesting piece. I strongly favor the middle stanza.
    ~Faith

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