by Vanessa Lea Mar 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Why do you keep hurting me? |
by Brooke Amity
I love how this poem "flows" |
Hm...I'm not sure I like this. Something about it just doesn't seem right to me...Forgive me for being so harsh. You did have nice rhyming, though. |
by *~vixen~*
Great job, kind of a tear jerker. :) |
by Fallen~Tears
Excellent poem..Keep writing .. Thanks for commenting on my poems |
by Sarika666
Really good poem ..I like it!Keep writeing :D |