Dear ranju,
Your poem is simply beautiful. Full of love.Definitely flawless.
It's nice to meet another indian. Please do introduce yourslef through e-mail when you do have time. I rarely come on to this site since i've just lots to study and cope up with. In the mean while i hope you'll read my new poem and leave a comment on it.;-)
Wishing you good luck and prosperity.
Sreeram