He couldn't take anymore

by Fallen~Tears   Mar 12, 2006


This pain inside me grows like nothing else before
i need some way to escape i cant take it anymore

So off i go to buy a blade
if that what helps memories of you fade

Just one slice thats all i need
hopefully this pain will go away once i bleed

Just another slice then i promise I'll be done
but he didn't know it had really just begun

Just a little deeper it'll be OK
all it is, is away of letting this pain drain away

That slice was just a Little to deep
His secret he couldn't keep

as he finished slicing his veins
this was it, it was to much pain

thats what he said as he dropped to the floor
but thats always what he wanted he couldn't take anymore

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. thats so sadd.. you write such SAD poems! haha.. im not surprised that i dont burst into tears every time i see your name now! lol! keep up the amazing work!
    jessy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww that is so sad.. I loved it. the flow & rhythm was really good. You're an amazing poet, You really have a way of putting emotions in a poem.. I'm definitely adding you to my favorites! Great job on this! I can't wait to read more!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was good. Although it sounded like you were talking about yourself at the beginning, and then you switched it. Hmm.. I'm not sure. It was good though. Keep writing!

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Wow!!! amazing!!!!!! sad but great! u seem to write a lot of sad poems...but they all turn out great!...keep it up

    ~!Sandra!~

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