If...

by Fallen~Tears   Mar 12, 2006


If cutting myself will release my pain

Then ill never stop slicing my veins

If shooting myself will make me forget

Then id shoot myself a million times without regret

If hanging myself will take away my tears

Then ill do it holding back no fears

If drowning myself will make everything go away

Then id do it every single night and day

If taking a pill will make everything stop

then ill take them until i drop

But none of This will ever truly take away your pain

No matter what it will always remain..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    Another very sad, but well written poem. I enjoy reading your poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I really like the message prirtrayed in this poem. The writing and rhyming are really good. Keep it up!

    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is a short poem, but still your message is very clear, and so true. There's many things we can do to escape from our problems and the things we're afraid of, but that's not the cure, that's not what we need. We need to find our own way to deal with pain and trouble, even if it's hard.

    Good job!

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Awesome poem
    one of the best poem i've read
    wish i could give u 10/5 on this
    awesomely awesome
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Excellent, this was amazing. Im speacheless.

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