Brilliant as always. I really have to catch up on your stuff.
This piece just breaks my heart. I can really relate to much of what you've said.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

This is so beautifully tragic - a soul stirring piece of poetry and a bitter revelation of life.
the emotions seem to pour out so well - it left me with this heavy feeling in my heart.

just a small suggestion - i thought the word "damn" in the last stanza seemed a olloquial in this otherwise perfect peice - although it does bring out the frustration well.

hope you are ok. do take care.

good luck and peace
shobhana

When a poem can actually make you feel the writers emotions like that, its truly a work of art. Very nice.

I did so love this piece. especially the second stanza
every street i go down
is a cul-de-sac of emotion and memories
that leaves me no exit for escape.
have truelly felt that way myself.