Comments : Lamentation (Acrostic)

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow........

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    HansRik very nicely done. It took me a couple of times to get a handle on it but very nice, indeed. Superb write!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by guyute

    Very intresting and very well written.

  • Hey, i really liked this, as always your use of words is incredible, i liked it a lot.
    Well Done!
    Thanks for your comment, i really appreicate it!!

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I really enjoyed this, I love your choice of words they are fresh and different from so many other poems that end up sounding the same. I also liked how you make each line sound as if it comes naturally and is not forced to some structure, even though the piece is acrostic and therefore it would be. Once again, awesome work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Mi tierno amigo mio.... y a que se debe este poema? Me gusto mucho el estilo acrosstic, it's very unique. La estructura del poema fue increible, tienes tanto talento... cuidate mucho, abrazos muy fuertes de una amiga para ti.
    ~Gesselle~