by Rican Chemistry Mar 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Its been years since that night |
by amber
Perfect for lack of a better word. It's so good. I mean the way you used these words is just amazing. I really like this. . . especially the ending. You did real well with this.....it's my favorite so far. Sounds like something i would say or do if i was hurt. Well girl its good and i gave it a 5 but if a 10 was available i would have. |
by Nee
Heyyy |
Nice..Nice..Nice...I am astounded. This is what I call poetry..You should become a writer...You'd go far. |
by Fugi Andisfather
I'm going to be truthful-most of the stanzas were good, some were excellent, and some fell flat. Improve your rhymes |
by MaSkEdSoUl
Wow, this is a very good poem. Its so deep, Keep up the good work. 5/5 |