Wow, i really like this poem. great imagery. keep up the good work!
~Sami

That really is great :) It's nice to read a happier poem once in a while - though underlying sadness is always hidden somewhere :)

Peace. [Sole]

Anywhere has to be better than this world, right? i love this poem...dreamy...my kind of write :) well done

This is great! Descriptive and beautiful with a fantasy backdrop.

I love this and that last line is poetry perfection! Beautifully conveyed with a wonderful message, excellent write!

Ahh, nice fantasy writing here. You're going on my faves. 5/5 again!

Sondos! i think i've told you this many times over - but u have some reaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllll talent girl!!!!

your stuff is definitely worth going beyond a website into the big world of books!

love and peace
shobhana

Wow, Amazing Job! I love the way it convays so much meaning. good Job!

~Joe~

Woah, that really made me think, that was amazing! Wow...that's all i can say right now!!!! That was just...so good it's hard to be put into words!!!!!

Haha, it was Le-Cute. I loved it..Great Imagery aswell along with lovely rythem and flow. :)

Very vivid and concise. Keep up the lovely writing.

This was cool! Loved how you ended it. Wasn't too long or too short. It was just right. Nothing bad I can say about it. It was great!

`taleee xx