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by Poet on the Piano
"As you laid dead in your cradle, I cried a million tears. I loved you more than anything, You were worth all my fears." Wow, I could tell this was straight from your heart! So very sad! Just some suggestions: "I'm sorry you had to go my love, I do anything for you back. I prey that you are happy now, Laid buried in a sack." I do should be I'd do. I prey should be I pray. Otherwise, I could feel the sadness sweep over me, nice work!