This really is a very very beautiful poem and I can relate to it very well. Again it is awesome--you are REALLY good at this ... Keep it up!! Check out my poems when you get a chance.

I thinnk this poem is good! somehow this makes me think of "LIL MERMAID" bcuz she really wants the prince...really good poem! i kno many people feel like that, so it reache sout to them :P