Welcome to my life

by VYXSIN   Mar 12, 2006


Welcome to a place
where everything turns bad
leaving marks on my skin
where i always seem to be sad
welcome to a place
where everything falls apart
where thinking positive
could never be a start
welcome to a place
where everything is worse
living with the fact
my life is like a curse
welcome to a place
where no one could ever understand
the pain i feel
and lend a helping hand
welcome to a place
where i cant live i cant live without the knife
everythings a nightmare
welcome to my life

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really enjoyed this.

    The pain and emotion you portrayed in this was overwhelming without being overbearing, and the melancholy really tugs on the reader's heartsrings.

    Flow was good throughout, and the imagery was beautifully done, as always.

    I enjoyed the repetition, I thought it worked very nicely and gave a powerful effect to the overall piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Hi my names dean i saw the same thing on tv as you did the doc..yea i cant see how some of the people were laughing about that poor young girl killing her self. any ways this poem rule i feel you.

    love Dean xoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Bvrilliantly written. 1 suggestion though, maybe if you split it into 4 line stanazs it would help with the overall effect and make it easier to read. but it is a well well written and expressed peice

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashly

    Thats a great poem i really like it alot

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