Pretty girl

by VYXSIN   Mar 12, 2006


Shes so pretty
its so unfair
nice brown eyes
long brown hair

shes so popular
she mates with everyone at school
could never be friendless
never ba unkool

shes so pretty
behind all her lies
although she doesnt show it
theres a little a little girl that cries

shes so pretty
even if its a disguise
but she wont be so pretty
if she commits suicide

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  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    You have a good story to tell but you lose your rythm. I would do some rereading looking for typos, loss of rythm. first stanza is great and the fourth is OK but your flow leaves in the second and third. I would like to read this reworked. As always just an opinion.

  • 18 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    I realy real LOVE this poem that was the best....omg....ur a sweet poet

    i look up to you.

    love Dean oxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Wow beautiful with a sad touch my absolute fave of all your poems ive read so far LOve ally

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