Wow beautiful with a sad touch my absolute fave of all your poems ive read so far LOve ally

I realy real LOVE this poem that was the best....omg....ur a sweet poet

i look up to you.

love Dean oxoxox

You have a good story to tell but you lose your rythm. I would do some rereading looking for typos, loss of rythm. first stanza is great and the fourth is OK but your flow leaves in the second and third. I would like to read this reworked. As always just an opinion.