by Daze
This was a good story, a story that i would of liked to of known more about, but as a poem it had a good flow to it and i liked it very much, so good job, 5/5, thanks for reading my poems as well |
by BECLiKEW0AHH
Great poem, It rhymed really well.. I enjoyed reading it. 5/5. |
by holly
This was good, you told the story well and the ending was expressed particularily well xxALLYxx |
by Emma
A stroy told by poetry are some of the best stories...and thats what you did and it was amazing. nice job. |
by Hareem
Cool, really interesting, there's always a whirlpool of sentiments pulsating our hearts and minds and this poem projects it well. |
by LuvMeAlwayz
Awesome poem, sounds so real and very interesting |
by Amanda
Lovely friendship poem. It was very understandable to read and i think you are a brilliant writer. keep it up :) |
by Sondos
Really sweet. A pretty lengthy poem and you maintained interest with a great flow |
by Brigitte
Awe that was such a uplifting poem! it really shows the light at the end of a tunnel! I loved how you put so much of your personality in the poem. I can tell you weren't writting to please anyone but yourself, But in the process you wrote an amazing work of art! Just a little somthing to change at the end |
by Brigitte
Awe that was such a uplifting poem! it really shows the light at the end of a tunnel! I loved how you put so much of your personality in the poem. I can tell you weren't writting to please anyone but yourself, But in the process you wrote an amazing work of art! Just a little somthing to change at the end |
by Latasha
I really like this poem keep up the good work |
by Sarah Ann
This was good. I could really feel your deep emotion put into the words with much effort. Keep up your good work. |
by Emily
Aww a very happy ending for lost love. I like all the examples you used to prove your point! Good job! |
Aww lindsay, sorry that ur still thinkin bout david, he still annoys me sometimes but since you left I haven't really talked to him except on the occasion to fill him in on you and tell him to call you or e-mail you so as to lessen my work load :P |
by Megann Lee
Good poem, abit sad but None the less it was really good. |