BROKEN

Awesome. i loved it! i hav just gotten thru something like this and i kno it hurts, and then u feel like a fool b/c ur holding onto something u neevr had...it sux...and thx for ur concern but im really not fat..thats just the way ive looked at myself before...b/c im not as small as i used to be and i hav a friend with a perfect body. im excercising to get in to better shape tho...this was a great poem and thx for ur comment...
love ya lots,
sore

That is the prettiest poem that i have read yet!!!!!
this is awesome!!
its is good your an awsome writter!!!
i love this powm

GREAT, 5/5 my favorite part was

'And after all the lies you said,
I still want them to be true,
Even though its fake what we had,
I'm still addicted to you...'

but It would sound really good if you changed 'after all the lies you said' to 'after all the lies you commited to'

just a suggestion
anyways another greatone
~*~BrokenTessa~*~

Aww. Cute poem. Luffles it. I know what it feels like too. Good work and keep it up!

- ♥ ShatteredOne

I liked it!! Keep up the good work!!