Wow..This is really good. I Loved the way you worded it. And my fav line is.."Chained like prisoners
In a jail cell called life"
That is so true! 5/5 Keep up the good work =]

- luv natz x0x

Wow this is sad. but i love it. so many emotions. great.

Awesome!!!

W00t I'm impressed. I love this poem! Yep, looks like our world is full of lies. Unique to write about it. An especially in such a beautiful way like you just did. Left me speechless =) Well done!!! =)

Such a true poem - I agree with Natalie -
'Chained like prisoners
In a jail cell called life'

Is an excellent combination of lines :)

Keep up the awesome work.

Peace. [Sole]

Your poem is really expressive and easy to relate to, and I'm not sure exactly how many people would be able to put a really good insight into life and our society today like you did through the poem, especially in such few words. I really like your poem :)

-kelsie

Hey! girlie that was awesome! i still love reading ur poems! 5/5

Fantastic poem def a 5/5 keep writing and take care hun sarah x