Without you

by Brittany   Mar 12, 2006


Without you...
I wouldnt have an angel
noone to guide my way
noone here to help me
get through another day
without you
i wouldnt have anyone to talk to
i wouldnt have a best friend
noone here to be with
when i want my life to end
So thanx for bein my hero
and i know im not the best
but thanx for bein my cryin shoulder
When i need to get things off my chest

This is dedicated to sam my bestest friend in the world!!!!

i really dont like the ending so plzzzzzz help me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    I love it and i dedicate it to my best friend MICHAEL! hes always been there for me!

  • 16 years ago

    by iluvbradley

    I lovered it!! I don't know what I'd do without my best friend either!! I prolly wouldn't be here if it wasn't for Zach.

  • 17 years ago

    by Devon

    Pretty awesome poem its like a song, floats beatifully.

    um... you say you don't like the end... try something like this after ur line when i want my life to end. after that write something like what happen when the angels flies away etc...

    thnx for commenting on my poem cheers. 5/5

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