Pretty awesome poem its like a song, floats beatifully.

um... you say you don't like the end... try something like this after ur line when i want my life to end. after that write something like what happen when the angels flies away etc...

thnx for commenting on my poem cheers. 5/5

I lovered it!! I don't know what I'd do without my best friend either!! I prolly wouldn't be here if it wasn't for Zach.

I love it and i dedicate it to my best friend MICHAEL! hes always been there for me!