Thats some really nice writing...5/5

I think you are a great writer, this was an excellent poem, full of depth and emotion, i know how you feel, please comment on one of mine,if you ever need to talk feel free to email me,
love cass xoxo

This is really great.
some parts were a bit choppy.

but the part that says:

dear addiction,
i cant hide from you
contradiction, what am i to do
dear addiction,
why cant i break though
my prediction i will die with you

is awesome!
it could be turned into a song.

so keep up the writing.